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From dearmad@sapere.com:

not very clear how the gears related to the spinning planet- it was notshown.
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From bbowen@cswnet.com:
The inner workings of the outer Universe. Very original interpretation of the theme.

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From dick@buckosoft.com:
I like the lighting on the clockworks

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From bitdaf@tcainternet.com:
Nicely done with the workings...the gears and such! I owuld have liked to see more of that-with variations- and just a spot of the earth and moon refeence. Although the meaning wasn't lost on me- I understand the interpretation- Overall I enjoyed it.

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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
A bit naive, though the idea has some interest.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
More like "outer workings" than "inner workings", heh heh.  I see the point you were trying to make, but I couldn't help feeling that I was missing something.  Maybe it's because the interesting mechanism seems to have no connection to the planets.

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From lou_bruce@yahoo.com:
The scene change was rather abrupt, without the text file the correlation between the mechanism and the world kind of gets lost.


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From file:
Notable for originality, composition, lighting, modelling


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From file:
you have very good lighting
Notable for lighting, textures