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From djconnel@flash.net:
The scene is nicely topical, and the interpretation artfully done.
Technically, it could use some refinement, however.... even just a little
texturing would help a lot.

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From castlewrks@aol.com:
I can feel the heat... those poor slaves, nothing but
toasted marshmellows... and all the same.
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From up@ct.heise.de:
I thought thay had no wheels.

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From sonya_roberts@geocities.com:
A good early effort.  Work on adding more detail (and doing the odd bit of
research to maintain accuracy, and you should get some good results in future
rounds.

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From chipr@niestu.com:
Very strong color theme, works well.  I like the modeling on the people.  Did
the Egyptians use wheels?

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Convincing sense of distance.  And heat.  And hard work.
Innovative use of fog.  This is a fine image.

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From arcana@sinbad.net:
Pretty good first attempt. :{)
The main thing you need to focus on are more detailed textures. The little
things.
The things you'd swear no one is going to pick out of a scene. Those are the
things that the eye and mind add up to say, "this is real".

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From wozzeck@club-internet.fr:
Amazing yellowish aspect, especially the sky.
Your lighting is a bit simple, responsible for the lack of details.
Go on entering the IRTC, it's a very good way to improve your pictures!
Next time, try to get more information before you make the micture, and render
it at 800x600.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
Very interesting image. Quite artistic but you 
really should have done a bit of research. 

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From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de:
4 men could never, ever, pull a brick that size up a ramp that slope! Everyone
would have to pull against a force equivalent of several tons.

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From lpurple@netcom.com:
Nice visual effect, with all the desert colors. The blurred figures
in the forground also work really well.


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From r@cust169.webbernet.net>:
The sky is dramatic and impressive and the overall color scheme is very
effective, but the slab design of the pyramids gives a "krinkly french fry" or
"horrible antialiasing" impression that detracts from the image.  The overall
design is unhistorical, but well planned.